高考语文语序不当病句辨析与修改，语序不当怎么改

修改语序不当的病句的方法就是调整语序，使其合乎逻辑。

如，逻辑关系不当，“我改正并发现了错误。"应先发现后改正才符合逻辑。递进关系不当，“好多私家车乱停乱放，不仅存在安全隐患，还会影响市民的正常出行。″安全隐患比影响出行更严重，应改为“不仅会影响市民正常出行，还存在安全隐患″。.

什么团购网最好

目前，国内最好的团购网站应该是美团。美团在团购领域经验丰富，用户数量庞大，商品和服务类型多，且也开展了外卖、旅游等业务。

它不仅囊括了全国各大城市的餐饮、旅游、美容、休闲等团购信息，还有大量优惠的电影票及旅游商品。

同时，美团的平台规则清晰简明，购买流程顺畅，售后服务质量有保障，得到了用户的高度评价。

因此，美团可以说是买家、商家和第三方之间的良好沟通桥梁，无论是在价格、服务、口碑等方面都有着卓越的表现。

什么团购软件最好

团购软件最好的

1、美团优选

美团优选是美团旗下的提供社区团购业务的平台，其采取“预购+自提”的模式，用户只要在前一天的23点前下单商品，第二天就能到团长处自提。

2、多多买菜

多多买菜是拼多多于2020年8月推出的社区团购平台，和美团优选一样，用户也是23点前下单，第二天就能自提取回商品，非常方便，里面的商品性价比也很高。

苏州哪家酒吧比较好

苏州酒吧排名前十的有：

粗糖音乐餐厅酒吧(月光码头店)、苏州W酒店WOOBAR大堂吧、潘多拉3D酒吧、LION！红酒体验吧ORIGINALWINE&BAR、胡桃里音乐酒馆（新区店）、甘尼仕印度餐厅酒吧(月光码头店)、星德罗酒吧、Together.Bar&;Lounge、17cm.club、观前街酒吧。

这些酒吧都可以的。

国外最忧伤的10大歌曲谁知道

1.一定不要错过这个：my prayer

Devotion - My Prayer

我听着听着就很难过了。男孩真的很让人感动。心情好的时候听它也会难过。

(spoken)

Dear god,

I know that she?s out there...the one I?m suppose to share my

whole life with.

And in time...you?ll show her to me.

Will you take care of her, comfort her, and protect her...until

that day we

Meet.

And let her know...my heart...is beating with hers.

In a dream I hold you close

Embracing you with my hands

You gazed at me with eyes full of love

And made me understand

That I was meant to share it with you

My heart my mind my soul

Then I open my eyes

And all I see reality shows I?m alone

But I know someday that you?ll be by my side

Cause I know god?s just waiting till the time is right

God will you keep her safe from the thunderstorm

When the day?s cold will you keep her warm

When the darkness falls will you please shine her the way

God will you let her know that I love her so

When theres no one there that she?s not alone

Just close her eyes and let her know

My heart is beating with hers

So I prayed until that day (prayed until that day)

When our hearts will beat as one (when our hearts hearts will

beat as one)

I will wait so patiently (patiently)

For that day to come (for that day to come)

I know someday that you?ll be by my side

When the darkness falls will you please shine her the way (shine

he the way)

When theres no one there that she?s? not alone

Is beating with hers (ooo)

My heart is beating with hers (oooo)

It?s beating with hers

Oh~~~ it?s beating with hers

(it?s beating with yours)

翻译：

敬爱的神

她，那个我想要与她共度一辈子的人，虽然不在这里。

但是我相信，某个时刻，你将会让我见到她。

能不能好好照顾她，让她过得开心，还要佑护她，直到我们见面的那一天。

还有，让她知道，我的心，为她而存在。

在梦里我常常梦到你，拥抱你，我看到了，你用充满爱意的眼神看这我。

我真的愿意全心全意的和你分享一切，然而当我睁开眼，看到的却是我还是孤单一人。

但我知道，总有一天你会出现在我身边，因为上帝正在安排这个正确的时间。

上帝你能不能让她平安，远离风暴。当天气寒冷，你能不能让她温暖。

上帝你能不能让她知道我如此爱她，让她知道即使世界上没有其他人，

她也不会孤单，让她知道只要她闭上眼睛，她就会知道我的心为她存在。

我祈祷那天能出现，我们感受到彼此的心在同时跳动。我会一直耐心的等待，只为这一天的到来。

我知道总有一天你会出现在我身边，因为上帝正在安排这个真确的时间。

上帝你能不能让她平安，远离风暴。当天气寒冷，你能不能让她温暖。上帝你

能不能让她知道我如此爱她。让她知道即使世界上没有其他人，她也不会孤单。让她知道只要她闭上眼睛，她就会知道我的心为她存在。

我的心只为她存在，一直为她存在。。。

上帝你能不能让她知道我如此爱她。让她知道即使世界上没有其他人，

她也不会孤单。让她知道只要她闭上眼睛，她就会知道我的心为她存在。

我的心只为她存在，一直为她存在...

2.i'm sorry-some dude

这首歌还名为：You were my everything

就是一个男孩没珍惜那女孩

结果那女孩放弃了这个男孩

之后这男孩开始后悔，

开始向那女孩解释，诉说那些感情，

他们的过去以及对女孩的思念

同时他也知道女孩不可能回头

最后表明自己的心已死

希望女孩能幸福

This goes out to someone that was

Once the most important person in my life

I didn’t realize it at the time

I can’t forgive myself for the way I treated you so

I don’t really expect you to either

It’s just... I don’t even know

Just listen…

You’re the one that I like, the one that I need

The one that I gotta have just to succeed

When I first saw you, I knew it was real

I’m sorry about the pain I made you feel

That wasn’t me; let me show you the way

I looked for the sun, but it’s raining today

I remember when I first looked into your eyes

It was like God was there, heaven in the skies

I wore a disguise "cause I didn’t want to get hurt

But I didn’t know I made everything worse

You told me we were crazy in love

But you didn’t care when push came to shove

If you loved me as much as you said you did

Then you wouldn’t have hurt me like I ain’t shit

Now you pushed me away like you never even knew me

I loved you with my heart, really and trul

I guess you forgot about the times that we shared

When I would run my fingers through your hair

Late nights, just holding you in my arms

I don’t know how I could do you so wrong

I really wanna show you I really need to hold you

I really wanna know you like no one could else know you

you are number one, always in my heart

And now I can’t believe that our love is torn apart

I need you and

I miss you and

I want you and

I love you ‘cause

I wanna hold you,

I wanna kiss you

You were my everything

And I really miss you

I knew you gonna sit and play this with your new man

And then sit and laugh as you’re holding his hand

The thought of that just shatters my heart

It breaks in my soul and it tears me apart

At times we was off I was scared to show you

Now I wanna hold you until I can’t hold you

Without you, everything seems strange

Your name is forever planted in my brain

Damn it, I’m insane,

Take away the pain

Take away the hurt

Baby, we can make it work

What about when you

Looked into my eyes

Told me you loved me

As you would hugged me

I guess everything you said was a lie

I think about it, it brings tears to my eyes

Now I’m not even a thought in your mind

I can see clearly, my love is not blind

(Talking) I just wish everything could have turned out differently

I had a special feeling about you

I thought maybe you did too

You would understand, but…

No matter what, you’ll always be in my heart

You’ll always be my baby

Our first day, it seemed so magical

I remember all the time that I had with you

Remember when you first came to my house?

You looked like an angel wearing that blouse

We hit it off, I knew it was real

But now I can’t take all the pain that I feel

Reach in your heart, I know I’m still there

I don’t wanna hear that you no longer care

Remember the times? Remember when we kissed?

I didn’t think you would ever do me like this

I didn’t think you’d wanna see me depressed

I thought you’d be there for me, this I confess

You said you were my best friend, was that a lie?

Now I’m nothing to you, you’re with another guy

I tried, I tried, I tried, and I’m trying

Now on the inside it feels like I’m dying

(Talking) And I do miss you

I just thought we were meant to be

I guess now, we’ll never know

The only thing I want is for you to be happy

Whether it be with me, or without me

I just want you to be happy

3.con il tuo nome 意大利语

这一首来自 altan 的凯尔特元歌曲,由意大利女歌手Ivana Spagna演唱，没有太多电子和流行元素的介入，自然、淳朴、原始，毫无雕饰。歌曲中震撼人心的交响伴奏似乎要把人从梦里惊醒，让人感受到这疏离于人类的气息，感受到令人心碎的悲凉。而结尾的高潮，则营造出了无与伦比的纷乱及至毁灭般戏剧魅力！那突然听闻天堂的号角，人世的嘈杂逐渐远去，让这种已经浸入骨髓直至灵魂深处的伤感激荡徘徊于耳边......

这首歌，译成中文是“深入骨髓的悲伤”，歌曲是讲述这样一个故事：一个女子在年轻的时候由于父亲的安排嫁给了一个显贵的子弟，她开始担心自己的年龄有一天会成为感情悲剧的主因，她埋怨父亲错误的将自己嫁给了一个比她小很多的男子。婚后第二年，他们有了自己的孩子，而她的夫君却也还是一个孩子，在一天天的长大。她送他去上学，为他裹了蓝色的头巾，她怕别人抢走父亲为自己选定依存的真爱。 而命运的捉弄，却使她很快成了寡妇，在为爱人缝制寿衣的时候，她的悲哀成了整个曲子的灵魂...

L’amore resta un mistero

che non si svelerà mai

Z0e a volte capita che ami chi non ha

per te nessuna pietà.

L’amore non chiama amore

e spesso fugge da te

z0ed io che ti ho creduto

ora credo che

m0non mi resta che dimenticarti e

con il tuo nome

scritto dentro l’anima

cercherò amore

amore che sempre hai negato a me.

Non c’è giustizia in amore

e c’è chi paga per te

anche se non vorrei fare a nessuno mai

0il male che tu invece hai fatto a me

e un altro amerò se non posso amare te.

Con il tuo nome

0cercherò amore

l’amore è tutto quello che da te non ho.

scritto dentro l’anima.

che inciso dentro il cuore porterò

e tutto quello che da te non ho

中文歌词：

树儿，他高高的生长，叶儿，她嫩绿嫩绿

很早我就见到了我的爱人

很多时候，我悄悄凝望他

他很年轻却一天天的成长

父亲，亲爱的父亲，你对我做了件大错事

你让我嫁给一个太年轻的男孩

我都24了他却14

女儿，亲爱的女儿，我并没做错什么

我让你嫁给了一个不错的小伙子

当我老去离开后他将成为你唯一的男人

父亲，亲爱的父亲，如果你觉得适合

我们来年就送他去学校

我会把他头上绑条蓝丝带

让其他的女子知道他已经结婚

有天，我在我父亲的城墙观望

我看到很多男孩子在玩球

我的至爱是其中最显眼的一个

黎明初晨

他们在草地上运动玩耍

她无法知道他们在做什么

但她再也不会抱怨他的成长

他14岁时就是个已婚男子了

15岁 他就成了我孩子的爸

16岁时他年轻的离去了

死亡把他的成长定格成终点

我要为我的爱人买些布裳，

我要为我的爱人做件裳，

我的一针一线

泪滴汇制

泪从何处流

残酷的命运带走了我年轻的爱人